In Room 9 we have been learning how to write persuasions! When we write one, we are trying to convince people of our opinion. In a successful persuasion we have to write what we think, why we think that and finish with a personal statement. Check out our first try!
I think ice cream is the best breakfast. By Jaspreet
I think cereal is the best breakfast because I like it. By Matthew
I think lollipops are the best breakfast because they are yum and they have sugar in them. By Gason
I am eating ice cream for breakfast. By Aidan
I think hamburgers are yummy! By William
I like watermelon. By Adheesh
I think McDonald's is the best breakfast because they make muffins and they are yummy. By Brooke
I think lollipops are good for breakfast because they are yum. By Anmol
I think Weetbix is the best breakfast because they make you play rugby. By Ronan
I think egg in a hole is the best breakfast food because it is yummy! By Lesleigh
I like muffins for breakfast because they have chocolate in them. By Simran
I think that lollipops are the breakfast. By Madeline
I think that eggs are the best for breakfast because they are good. By Ya-Wen
I think chocolate ice cream is the best breakfast. By Jasmeen
I think lollipops are the best breakfast because they are yummy! By Andrea
I think toast is the best breakfast. By Julia
I think McDonald's is the best breakfast because I love it! By Courtney
I think ice cream is the best breakfast. By Jaspreet
I think cereal is the best breakfast because I like it. By Matthew
I think lollipops are the best breakfast because they are yum and they have sugar in them. By Gason
I am eating ice cream for breakfast. By Aidan
I think hamburgers are yummy! By William
I like watermelon. By Adheesh
I think McDonald's is the best breakfast because they make muffins and they are yummy. By Brooke
I think lollipops are good for breakfast because they are yum. By Anmol
I think Weetbix is the best breakfast because they make you play rugby. By Ronan
I think egg in a hole is the best breakfast food because it is yummy! By Lesleigh
I like muffins for breakfast because they have chocolate in them. By Simran
I think that lollipops are the breakfast. By Madeline
I think that eggs are the best for breakfast because they are good. By Ya-Wen
I think chocolate ice cream is the best breakfast. By Jasmeen
I think lollipops are the best breakfast because they are yummy! By Andrea
I think toast is the best breakfast. By Julia
I think McDonald's is the best breakfast because I love it! By Courtney
Gosh you are clever persuasion writers Room 9.
ReplyDeleteWe are a year 2 class from Tauranga and we have been writing persuasion’s too, next term we are writing letters and we would like to know if we could write letters to you and be Pen pals?
ReplyDeleteFrom Miss Ward and Room 4,Matua School