Sunday, May 30, 2010

Our Dance!


Wow, we had so much fun performing in assembly! All the hard work was worth it.

In writing we are learning to add more detail to our stories. We can be successful at this by answering some of these.
  • What am I going to do?
  • Who is going to be there?
  • When is it going to happen?
  • Where will it happen?
  • Why did it happen?
Read our awesome dance stories and see how great we are getting at adding detail!

On Friday I will go to the assembly.
By Emma D

I am on the stage.
By Gian

On Friday I am dancing in the hall.
By Charlotte

On Friday I am dancing in assembly.
By Connor

I am on stage. I am dancing.
By Brooke

I am dancing.
By Conan

I am dancing at the assembly with Room 3.
By Tevita

On Friday I am dancing in the assembly to Justin Bieber.
By Nicholus

On Friday I am going to the assembly and everyone will watch me dance.
By Binnaa

I am dancing on the stage with everybody.
By Ricky

I am dancing for the people.
By Phoebe

I am going to assembly to do some dancing.
By Pazia

On Friday my class and Room 3 are going to do a dance.
By Sara

On Friday I am dancing in the assembly.
By Damanjot

On Friday I am going on stage for assembly. I am dancing.
By Tegan

On Friday we are dancing at assembly. We are dancing like Justin Bieber.
By Junior

1 comment:

  1. Hi Room 9! We think your blog is cool. We really like the fish and the pictures. Maybe you could put a photo up of your teacher? Did you know our teacher is Miss Macdonald too!!!!

    Love Room 15 :)

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